Please write your thesis statement to your new narrative. Remember, a narrative thesis must state your event (topic) and what you learned, moral, or why your event is worth telling. Your narrative must be compelling. Please proofread and use Word and then transfer your post into the blog. This counts as homework/participation and a post with incomplete sentences and a lot of spelling errors does not show me a lot of effort.
For example:
My three year old son falling in the water was terrifying, but it was a wake up call to me that I had to teach him to swim or risk losing him.
Here is a helpful link on writing narratives: http://www.rscc.cc.tn.us/owl&writingcenter/OWL/Narration.html Mrs. Arabas
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My childhood was by all accounts a very happy one it was full of adventurous, wonderful, and exciting experiences. I of course could tell you about them all but that would be too long of a story. Thus, I will tell you about this one memory in particular which is a very happy and fun one. It was the day that my soccer team and I, as Captain, won the school’s district championship. This event in my childhood was a very important and memorable one because I learned that if I try my best and work hard I will succeed.
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ReplyDeletefull of adventurous, wonderful, and exciting experiences. I of course could tell you about them all but that would be too long of a story. Thus, I will tell you about this one memory in particular which is a very happy and fun one. It was the day that my soccer team and I, as Captain, won the school’s district championship. This event in my childhood was a very important and memorable one because I learned that if I try my best and work hard I will succeed.
Fatima Coremin.
I had a beautiful family but not everything is how it seems. Everything started in Lima, Peru in, 2001. When I started to grow up I realized how my dad really was. I knew I loved both of my parents but if something was wrong I would prefer them separate than together. Because I’ve seen how my aunt and her husband used to fight for stupid things. I saw how my cousins suffer and I didn’t want that for me and my sister. But I knew that they were the ones that had to make the decision, and when my mom told me that she wanted to divorce my dad I told her that she would have all my support.
ReplyDeleteI was a child who was raised by a battered mom who had no one to help us from these horrifying events in our lives. I can remember as far back when I was five years old when the beatings began. My parents were loving and admired by many, until I hit the age of five and realized I was no longer being raised in a happy loving home. My dad came home late on my fifth birthday party and informed my mom that he lost his jon and the drinking began everyday for three years straight. I quickly learned that you should not stay in an abusive relationship.
ReplyDeleteI was a child who was raised by a battered mom who had no one to help us from these horrifying events in our lives. I can remember as far back when I was five years old when the beatings began. My parents were loving and admired by many, until I hit the age of five and realized I was no longer being raised in a happy, loving home. My dad came home late on my fifth birthday party and informed my mom that he lost his job and the drinking began everyday for three years straight. I quickly learned that you should not stay in an abusive relationship
ReplyDeleteLiving in Florida made me realize how important family and friends are.
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When my cousin and I left the house we were in a party mood, not knowing a tragedy was on its way.
ReplyDeleteThe Day I Went Thur Hell to get to My Interview on Time,only to be told the interview was rescheduled.
ReplyDeletelife changes all the time, but its what you do what those changes that keeps you going.
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